Now I have added all that needed to be added, I am pleased with the outcome. It is clear to see the masthead and read the hooks and writing. There aren't too many hooks to make it looks crammed and the layout is the way I want it. There aren't too many colours which would overpower the magazine altogether.
And compared to the first attempt, I think this one is a great improvement and looks a lot better. It looks more eye-catching and with the model looking at the camera, it's like she is looking at the readers, drawing them in.